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In Plain Sight: Hoosier Daddy

by Allison Waldman, posted Jun 9th 2008 10:22AM
in plain sight(S01E02) Overall, a very good episode from Mary and Marshall as In Plain Sight settles into the kind of show it's going to be. Far less frantic than the pilot -- which in retrospect looks like a case of too many cooks spoiling the broth -- this show dealt with one main issue and it was a touching one at that. The story starts 18 months earlier when Mary's assigned to place an 8-year-old boy who's seen drug dealers kill his mother in Witness Protection, which is virtually impossible unless she can find a family in the system who are willing to take on that responsibility.

I was stunned that she pulled it off, and when we were back in the present and we see little Lonny -- now Leo -- enjoying a perfect life with the Billups, I was skeptical. The adoption seemed too good to be true. Leo fit right in, taking care of the baby. Were the Billups for real? I thought there had to be something wrong, but it wasn't. I was just suspicious. It turns out there was a reason to show Lonny/Leo in such a happy family.


While he's having a happy family life, Mary's continues to be a disaster. Jinx and Brandi are just caricatures. How long has her mother been living there? We're told it's three weeks for Brandy since she's come from Jersey (the New was dropped by Mary). I loved Mary telling them both to get jobs and contribute or else. It was about time, but I'm still wondering about Jinx...has she been living there all along and Mary's only now asking her to get a job?

The job she gets is a Mary Kay Cosmetics like gig, Dana Dean Cosmetics. "I need $2500 to get started." If I were Mary, I wouldn't have done it, but here we see evidence of just what a softy Mary really is. She writes on her car-pad, "Transfer $2,500 for Jinx." She's a good daughter, but is Jinx any kind of a good mama? The answer, no.

In a scene that's a complete anachronism, Jinx dons a hot pink business suit and starts going door to door to sell the cosmetic. Nobody sells door to door anymore, do they? Of course, after one $10 sale, Jinx is done. She's ready to celebrate and goes to see one-eyed boyfriend for nookie. When his dog eats her sample case, her DD career seems over. Her lover says he doesn't love her enough to cough up $2,500 to replace the samples.

Meanwhile, Mary learns that Lonny's drug-dealer dad back in Indiana -- who has not been indicted -- is petitioning for custody of his son. Mary and Marshall, and a stuck up attorney from the DOJ (Department of Justice) have to fly Lonny back to Indiana to face a judge. Holed up in a big house with other marshals, it's like a big sleepover. Marshall wears funny pajamas, Mary comforts Lonny when he has nighttime fears of facing his Dad again. Good moments, especially more insight into Mary's real heart. She's doing this job because she cares.

The best scene in the show is when the court house has to be evacuated. It's a great action sequence; to flush Lonny out of the building, a car is blown up in the parking lot. The evacuation commences and in the crowd, Mary races to stop Marshall from taking Lonny out in the open. Turns out the evacuation exits are public information and the perfect way for the bad guys to rub out Lonny. They have a sniper rifle trained on the kid. Mary yanks him to safety just in time, then they race to get him into a government SUV and out of harm's way.

By the point in the episode when Lonny asks Mary about her gun, a Glock, she realizes Lonny has blocked out the truth about what happened the day his mother died. He used his father's gun to shoot the drug dealers but shot his mom instead. Vernon, the dad, still wants his son back. Mary won't let Lonny return to him and his dangerous life. She tells him, "You better make your peace with that," and we see her steely determination. But she also gives him photos of Lonny in his new life.

In an ending that was just a little too sappy/happy, the judge rules in Vern's favor, but he renounces his rights so Lonny can stay with the Billups. Then on the tarmac back in New Mexico, Lonny/Leo returns to his new family, but Dad is there, too. He's going to join WitSec, give evidence against the Cruz brothers, and have some kind of contact with his boy.

Other Points of Interest
-- The show had that time shift from the first scene to 18 months later. Hard to get into the time shift, but it's a necessary element to the storytelling.

-- How did Mary get a plain name like Mary when her mom is Jinx and her sister is Brandi? What? She named herself? In the episode when she's forced to use the alias Sarah White, Mary doesn't think she can pull off a Sarah!

-- Poor white trash background? You have to wonder about the Shannons. When Jinx and Brandi want to win over Mary's good favor, they do it with tuna casserole. Love the line, "With Velveeta and potato chip crust?"

-- Not so good line, "What's that game called, Texas what-em?" The smart ass kid is a TV cliche. On the other hand, I liked when they showed his sensitive side. He wonders if his Dad will think he doesn't love him anymore.

-- When protecting Lonny, Marshall gets tough at the courthouse and shows his bad-ass side. See, he's not always laid-back.

-- Where did Brandi get the cool red convertible? It was a Mercury Comet (called the Caliente in Mexico -- close enough to New Mexico) circa 1965 (although only 13,000 were made by Mercury that year). I love cool cars, but they're also a TV cliche. Everybody seems to have some kind of vintage wheels. Don't the producers know how expensive it is to keep a car like that? Also, where did it come from -- Mary drives the crappy Ford Probe, Brandis visiting from Jersey, and Jinx has nothing...

-- Does WitSec really use a private jet? Looks like a lot of tax payer dollars to take a kid to Indiana and back. Marshall and Mary couldn't have protected him on a commercial flight? I think they could have.

-- Mary doesn't even mention Raphael. Are they on a time out? She could have left a message on his machine, couldn't she?

-- Stan is a waste of time. He does nothing and yet he's Mary and Marshall's supervisor. No wonder they don't consult with him about their operations. The only thing cool about Stan is his last name - McQueen.

-- When is Mary going to get wise to Brandi's drug use and her calls to a boyfriend who's clearly a criminal?
Will Mary protect Brandi when her drug dealing is revealed?
Yes, family comes first for Mary11 (7.7%)
Yes, but she'll make Brandi clearn up her act60 (42.0%)
No, she's a law enforcement officer and will turn her in18 (12.6%)
Brandi will run before Mary finds out the truth54 (37.8%)

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Anne

One unbelievable part -- Mary sharing a room with the kid. There's no way a US Marshall would do this. It opens her up to all sorts of allegations of sexual abuse. And it certainly didn't make sense given that Marshall was with them!

August 30 2008 at 12:55 AM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
xnifex

Why does she look a lot different in this ep than she does in the pilot? Her face looks completely different IMO

June 10 2008 at 11:04 PM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
Toby OB

If the producers have anybody reading these comments, I hope they take our complaints seriously that the sister and mother have got to be jettisoned. They're killing the momentum of the show.

I watch my DVR recording once I get home from work, and I just fast-forwarded through their scenes - didn't miss anything important, it looks like.

June 10 2008 at 2:50 PM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
keithnl

Only just caught up with the First real episode. About the pilot, wasn't there a time when pilots weren't regularly aired? Being a pilot you're gonna cram what you can in to see what sticks.

I couldn't agree more with the disdain for theWacky mom and sis act. They hint its going somewhere, so hopefully when the pay off comes it will calm things down. Once Wacky mom realizes being so wacky means she's raised up a dimwitted drug mule.

The show is Mary McCormack's and its best when it focuses on her. I was struck by how physically imposing she is. Anyway now we have Brenda Johnson from "The Closer"and Grace Hanadarko from "Saving Grace" I think Mary Shannon makes a nice addition.

June 10 2008 at 8:39 AM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
Chris McCoy

My husband & I are giving the show a try because our favorite summer shows haven't started yet. However, we also could do with a lot less of the mother & sister act. In fact, we almost didn't continue watching the show because of them...in particular, the mom. Leslie Ann Warren has never been an actess we like & she happens to be extremely irritating in this role (and not in the way of a character you love to hate either)...just downright annoying!

June 10 2008 at 8:24 AM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
MERVE-THE-PERVE

Is that a different actress playing her sister than the one from the pilot? She looked older this week.

June 10 2008 at 2:30 AM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
Nick Dasko

In the first episode Mary warned Raphael that Brandi likes to boost cars. I am assuming that she boosted that Comet for the occasion.

June 09 2008 at 9:50 PM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
Beth

I gotta agree with Cindy. Just watched the show on DVR and wanted to ff every time the mom/sister act was going on! I don't know why anyone thinks that we enjoy seeing these train wreck characters running around being SO Stupid! I could probably deal with one... the idiot mom OR the criminal sister... but both is WAY to much!

On the other hand I am surprised by how much I like the rest of the show. My son (13 yo) and I are watching it together and I love shows that we can both watch!

June 09 2008 at 2:19 PM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
Cindy Gibson

I love this show already. But, I could do with alot less with mommy dearest and sister sin. They really bring down the show. I would like less of them and more of Raphael and Mary. It was a great show otherwise and you got to see the true nature of Mary. She really does care and takes the job seariously. I loved that Marshall showed his Macho side. we need to see that more also.
Can't wait till next week.

June 09 2008 at 11:40 AM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply
tspack

I liked this episode except for the end. Too neat. "Oh look. Everyone gets to live happily ever after."

June 09 2008 at 11:30 AM Report abuse rate up rate down Reply

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